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PostSubject: Talon Hawke, Tawfret Survivor   Thu Mar 17, 2016 3:01 am

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-Traits-
Character name: Talon Hawke
Race: Tawfretian Humanoid, cybernetic enhancements.
Age: Unknown, appears to be in her 20s
Gender: Intersex, female gender.
Height: 6 feet tall
Weight: A bit heavy
Appearance:
Tall with a toned physique. Has white hair tied back in a ponytail and grey eyes, and scars all across her body and face, in the Tawfret setting it's due to an explosion but on Treceran it's due to torture she endured while captured by the Tawfretian Authority. After that point, it's given time to heal. Her healing factor heals most of the damage, but still leaves a bit of scarring at least until it has time to fully heal. Rather large breasted, extremely pale(like completely white), tends to wear black lipstick.
Wears a black zero suit with a thin bit of armor padding around the crotch area and chest, along with a black leather jacket, when she's not wearing her power suit.
http://imgur.com/a/Dny0G Talon with her hair tied back, most of them being during her time on Tawfret, as an explanation for the outdated weaponry.
Strengths: Her mutated physiology gives her enhanced strength, speed, and regeneration. Immortality(As in cannot die from age, due to cybernetic implants and her mutant nature).  Psionic abilities.
Weaknesses: She may be able to regenerate wounds, but taking enough wounds will kill her. Especially decapitation.
Known Languages: Galactic standard. Has a universal translator in her power suit
Other: Bisexual.

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-Affiliation-
Faction/Organization: Bounty Hunter, formerly the Sons of Tawfret/Tawfretian Alliance
Alignment: Neutral

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-Misc.-
Other:
Equipment:
-A longsword vibroblade, has an energy wave emitter that allows her to slash targets from far away if she charges it, as well as sheathing the sword in a form of energy based off the beam option she chooses.
-One customized kinetic handgun, with a module that makes it fire weaker energy rounds when it's out of ammo. Alt-fire releases a charged explosive shot.
-A pump action shotgun, can fire pretty much anything that fits into its chamber. Like the pistol, also has a backup battery modification, though stronger as the pump motion charges its battery.
-A heavily customized Federation assault rifle, can use a good amount of ammo to fire a charged laser blast.
-Grapple leash, a function of the grapple beam in the arm upgrades area. Is capable of pulling enemies towards her or explosively slamming them on the ground.
-Gravity boots: As a side effect of the technology in her runner suit, kicking enemies will basically disable gravity for them for a few seconds, causing them to float away, leaving them open for a followup attack. She keeps this even with her powersuit and zero suit, as it's incredibly useful.
-Modified Prometheus series X42-Delta-Phi model Delta Rho-3 military prosthesis: A prosthetic she gained from a friend of Rose during the Dead Planet storyline. Blends in perfectly with synthetic skin, it is completely unnoticeable that it's a cybernetic unless, of course, she does very inhuman things like using her thumb as a lighter. Had its abilities absorbed into her powersuit in the same mission that she acquired it.


Cybernetic Arm Upgrades(Now part of the powersuit):
 
Psi Powers:
 

Tawfret storyline equipment:
 


Cybernetic Implants:
 

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Character History:

All that is known of her is that her home planet was Tawfret, and she was born to an Elven couple who were on the planet when the Phazon meteor crashed centuries before the actual phazon wars began, and she was born mutated due to the genetic mutations her parents received from residual contact with the leviathan impact, causing her hair to grow white, among other things. She grew up in the tunnels underneath the planet, the upper world of her region being a mostly uninhabitable, frozen forest.
At the age of 14, her town was attacked by bandits, who managed to kill just about everyone, with few survivors managing to escape, herself surviving due to only being grazed by a bullet and managing to hide. She was taken in by a group of scavengers who would take her along and protect her, in return for her doing a bit of work with them. They taught her how to survive in the wasteland, at least for a year. One day, they came across a group of insane raiders, who killed basically her entire group, with her being the only one left alive. In a state of panic, she ended up killing the entire group of raiders using her mind, with a group of Sons of Tawfret coming along to take her in, having heard the conflict going on from outside.

Arcturus Horrigan personally trained her for three years, teaching her how to use bows, guns, swords, and her hands in combat, and even learning how to pilot fighters and cars, with a Psi trainer teaching her how to control her Psionic abilities, giving her a Psi-amp connected to her neck. She was sent on a few recon missions, but one day she was sent on a mission. Take out the group of bandits who massacred her town.

She wiped out the entire group, but was caught in a horrible explosion that damaged her body horribly, and entirely destroyed her eyes. She was picked up off the field by Horrigan's men and brought down to Augtown, a hospital repurposed as both a settlement and a place to get cybernetic augmentations, alongside being a hospital, the robotic doctors there still fully functional. She was fully recovered, but needed prosthetic eyes, which were modified to assist with her Psyker abilities.

Eventually she was sent on a mission that involved her and her fighter squadron taking out a shield generator in the sky that powered a shield surrounding Tawfret City, the capital of the Authority. She succeeded in her mission, but was shot down, getting captured after a struggle, tortured and interrogated. With her giving them no sort of information, she actually managed to escape the planet by stealing a ship, being convinced the rest of the Sons were wiped out, so she decided to go to the nearby planet Treceran, running out of fuel before she could reconsider her plans.

The planet was infested with zombies pretty much minutes after she arrived. With the help of someone known to her as Rose, they wandered across the world, with her getting her suit, known as the Rift-Walker suit, and several replacement weapons.



-Battle suit-
Suit Name: Rift-Walker Suit
Suit Type: Transdimensional hazard protection exo-suit
Weaponry: Grapple beam emitters on wrists
Shielding: Energy shielding, including a very strong hard light shield that emits from the left bracer at will. Strong Phazon shielding
Other: Multiple visors and a translator.
Description and abilities:
 
Like most power suits, it can be materialized at will, as long as she's wearing a zero suit.
Appearance: Originally looked like this, except modified and fitted for her, giving it a more feminine figure. She is helmetless when outside of combat
Old Appearance:
 
The current armor looks like this: Images

Tawfret story:
 

-Ship-
Ship Name: The Mantis
Ship Type: Firefly class space transport
Weapon Systems: Laser and missile turrets on the "wings", high power energy turret under the cockpit.
Attachments: Enhanced shield generators, enhanced warp drive. "Dumb" Artificial intelligence that manages repair bots and autopilot along with auto turrets. Cargo hold doubles as a brig when needed.
Images: http://imgur.com/a/sZIHL
Registered to the Name of: Talon Hawke


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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, Tawfret Survivor   Sat Mar 19, 2016 12:21 am

Awesome. Now we just need to actually do the Tawfret RP. Then all will be perfect.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, Tawfret Survivor   Thu Mar 31, 2016 2:35 pm

I updated her to add a grapple beam(and a chain and spike for the Tawfret storyline), and changed the backstory. The surviving group is no longer called the militia, they're really just general scavengers that happen to also guard Sanctuary. I thought it was silly for a group established to not have very much ammo to actively go on raids against phazon beasts, when really such a group would be constantly on the defensive or at the very least using stealth instead.
And I really just play them as general scavengers anyway.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, Tawfret Survivor   Mon Apr 04, 2016 2:48 pm

Updated. Mostly appearance stuff.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, Tawfret Survivor   Fri Apr 29, 2016 1:39 pm

Updated equipment, and put a notice saying her history is outdated. Will be redoing that later.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, Tawfret Survivor   Mon May 02, 2016 4:01 pm

I might drop the idea of a powersuit in general and just have her have a generic space suit for when she needs to enter vacuum.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, Tawfret Survivor   Mon May 23, 2016 8:51 pm

Why hasn't this been approved yet, there a problem with her or something? Just wondering.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, Tawfret Survivor   Tue May 24, 2016 7:56 pm

Slight appearance update. She's got scars all over her, just thought that'd be a cool detail for this kind of character.

Also updated the backstory.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, Tawfret Survivor   Sun May 29, 2016 6:15 am

Updated, replaced the powersuit entirely and dropped the laser wings.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, Tawfret Survivor   Sun May 29, 2016 5:48 pm

Minor appearance update(and huge suit description update).
Just dropped the image references(Except the scars) and wrote a description myself.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, Tawfret Survivor   Tue Jul 12, 2016 12:30 pm

Just a thing, the Doomguy armor design is NOT the final design for Talon's suit. I'm still thinking of what it will look like, but that's just the working design.
I also kinda had it in mind that it could easily be customized aesthetically. Like she could go into one mission with one design and go into another with another design, similar to an RPG protagonist changing their armor. But I dunno if that makes it too videogamey(or if that matters, we're on an RP site about Metroid after all)
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, Tawfret Survivor   Wed Jul 13, 2016 8:34 am

Personally, I wouldn't think that would be too videogamey. I'd be fine with it, and honestly, I like the concept.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, Tawfret Survivor   Wed Jul 13, 2016 4:38 pm

I was thinking the default would end up being a less bulky design(based off my Hunter character in Destiny, who I based off her), with her trimming the bulk on the suit while keeping the same damage resistance just for the sake of better mobility.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, Tawfret Survivor   Thu Jul 14, 2016 6:10 am

It'd definitely help with my problem where I'm indecisive as hell about character design, at least armor-wise.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, Tawfret Survivor   Fri Jul 15, 2016 1:10 am

Added the modular appearance detail, and also added a throwing knife generator. She'll get it when they go back to report to Arcturus that the Leviathan is dead.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, Tawfret Survivor   Sat Aug 06, 2016 2:16 pm

Thinking of having Talon make her own mercenary group like I intended Talon Aran to(which is still canon)
Or she'll just join the Blood Dragons, either one.

Edit: I think I'll go with her making one when Legacy era comes. Based off the MSF and Diamond Dogs from Metal Gear, more heavily than the Blood Dragons. With a space station with warp capability as the main base. Hell a thing with Legacy Era could be a bunch of mercenary groups becoming more prominent(and also fighting eachother) because of how weakened the Federation is by the Kriken invasion.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, Tawfret Survivor   Wed Aug 10, 2016 7:25 pm

Added image references again. Also changed her design a bit, her eyes are grey(in hindsight, why would Phazon mutation turn her eyes red? If anything they'd be blue, but I don't see why she'd be born with a different eye color) and she has arm tattoos.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, Tawfret Survivor   Mon Aug 29, 2016 12:40 pm

Slight retcon idea: Talon has a lot of cybernetic implants from her time on Tawfret, since I'm deciding there was more civilization on that planet than just the Authority owned cities(which outlaw cybernetic implants). It'd be the same place that Arcturus got fixed up(known as Augtown, an underground area) when he lost his arms and eye, since she gets hit by an exploding truck(or something along those lines) and her body can't fix the damage by itself in a reasonable amount of time. The place is also where the Sons of Tawfret get their voluntary cybernetics.

I was thinking her spine, rib cage, and a few internal organs would've been replaced, along with her eyes and having a reinforced skeleton to accommodate the augmentations, alongside a lot of other ones like a one that triggers a bullet time-style effect, poison filters, and more. Aesthetic wise, nothing's really changed except that her eyes look artificial if one looks closely enough. It'd explain why she's so relaxed about getting a new cybernetic arm in the zombie story, since she already has some augmentations.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, Tawfret Survivor   Sat Sep 03, 2016 9:34 pm

Added the cybernetics, and also changed the way her home is destroyed. While also changing how she gets her scars(and the reason she needs the cybernetics in the first place).

I might write out the scenario where she ends up in that situation as a separate story, I'll just say it's pretty much the situation in my avatar.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, Tawfret Survivor   Thu Sep 29, 2016 1:38 pm

I'm trying to remove the references to old Federation technology because I feel like Tawfret was away from the Federation for so long that they built up their own technology.
The only Federation tech is used by the Authority, because a lot of them are former Federation and Boreale's command ship has a lot of equipment to go around.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, Tawfret Survivor   Tue Oct 18, 2016 7:59 pm

Updated her ship(with a placeholder name that I might change later, came from an in-joke related to the Mantis from The Old Republic). Now has an actual appearance and updated the weapons and stuff for it.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, Tawfret Survivor   Sun Nov 20, 2016 3:12 am

Idea: Instead of an energy shield, the cybernetic arm has a system similar to the Royal Guard ability from DMC, where it absorbs energy and can let it out in a blast(which is the beam weapon equivalent for the arm).
It will have limits to this(no absorbing death star superlasers or anything on that level, and it'll probably have to let out energy to prevent overload so no storing it from one battle to the next) but it'll be a more offensive sort of shield that I think fits her a bit more.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, Tawfret Survivor   Sun Nov 20, 2016 4:42 am

STOP KILLING MY BABY! *Sob*

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, Tawfret Survivor   Sun Nov 20, 2016 5:31 am

Wait what?
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, Tawfret Survivor   Sun Nov 20, 2016 12:35 pm

Okay, obviously some explanation is in order, I apologize for the easily misunderstood joke. Basically, you've been changing the design of this thing I created regardless of you, for the purpose of making it more fitting to her, in short, it wasn't originally designed for her. I made it before I gave it to her, I just thought it would be cool, interesting, and useful for the character. stuff like the shield change and the tech absorption modification...Look, I'm trying as hard as I can not to sound like an asshole (which I'm sure I do regardless), but in short, there was a reason this prosthetic series was outlawed and made illegal. I made it and made it and the backstory to it, and while putting some limits on it, or expanding on it in story style or so on, that's just fine (it fits with the concept of the tech), but you're retconning something I created and put out for Talon into something it's not. That kinda hurts, you know?

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