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| Subject: (Formerly Valla K'Sardis, working on a new name) Thu Mar 17, 2016 3:01 am | |
| Player ID: The Pinkest Catgirl <=-----=> -Traits- Character name: Valla K'Sardis Race: Zeji Age: Is about 445 when she leaves Treceran Gender: Intersex, female gender. Height: 7'5" Weight: A bit heavy Appearance: Tall with a toned physique. Slim waist, light purple skin covered in scales. Has a crest extending from the crown of her head, with some sort of almost hair-like appendages extending from the back of her head. Solid purple, glowing eyes. 3 fingers and a thumb on her hands. Constantly wearing armor resembling the second image, though a dark silver instead of gold. https://i.imgur.com/NTSJfrw.jpg Something along these lines, though with a mouth, and with hair more resembling this https://i.imgur.com/y7xhbLI.jpg Personality: The type who always likes a fun fight and hunt, usually rather quiet. Strengths: Strength and speed far above that of a human, along with powerful psionic powers. Near immortality(Her race is incredibly long lived). Can go into a berserker rage that makes her barely feel any sort of pain. Able to absorb sunlight instead of eating if needed. Weaknesses: She may be able to regenerate wounds, but she can be killed. Especially by decapitation. As for the rage ability, well there's a good reason pain is a thing. Known Languages: Galactic standard, though able to telepathically learn languages. Other: Pansexual, though only romantically interested in women. <=-----=> -Affiliation- Faction/Organization: Bounty Hunter, formerly the Sons of Tawfret/Tawfretian Alliance Alignment: Neutral <=-----=> -Misc.- Other: Equipment: -Shoulder cannon: A small retractable cannon made from ancient Zeji tech, able to channel her psionic energy into a very powerful plasma blast. -A hunting bow: A bow with a superhuman-ly high draw strength, with multiple different kinds of arrows including explosive and poison. -Glaive disc: A three bladed disc that she is capable of controlling using her mind, folds into a gauntlet until needed. -Psi-Sword: A hilt that projects pure psionic energy in the form of a blade -Psi-scythe: Regrettably not called a Psythe, the same as above but in dual sided scythe form. -Psi-spear -Psi wrist-blades -Assassin's short spear: A short spear used as a sort of assassination weapon, made out of an incredibly durable metal and able to channel psionic energy to boost its cutting power. -Remote bombs: Handheld explosives able to be remotely detonated using mental commands. Will stick to most surfaces. -Proximity mines: Like the remote bombs, but detonated by movement(Automatically disabled in the presence of a Zeji's psionic presence). Comes in explosive, laser, and even razornet flavors. - Psionic powers(Click here):
-Psionic grapple: Her equivalent to a grapple beam, extending a beam of pure solid psionic energy and using it to swing. -Whip: Is capable of using the psionic grapple as an energy whip. -Repulse: Sending out an intensely powerful wave of psychic energy, though using such a power completely drains her shielding -Shield: A bubble-like shield constantly surrounding the user, though only materializing when an attack is detected by the user. Does not block melee attacks, requiring active blocking. -Melee shield: An energy shield projected from the left arm like a traditional medieval shield. Blocks most attacks. -Telekinesis -Telepathy -Cloaking: Capable of reflecting light using her mind to avoid detection. Somehow works on electronic detection as well. -Psionic storm: The ultimate form of psionic attack, sending out waves of psionic energy over one area, causing heavy amounts of damage to anything inside. Powerful enough to actually damage herself with it. Not recommended for an enclosed area. -Blink: A short range teleport -Psychic vision: Detect things through walls and fog and things like that, along with seeing in the dark. -Jump: Able to jump very high, along with being able to fall long distances without any harm. -Force wall: Creating a wall of impenetrable psychic energy -Astral projection: Projecting her spirit out for exploration purposes. Capable of using psionic attacks in this form. -Doppelganger: Summoning a spirit projection that can fight alongside her, though only capable of doing melee attacks and only able to move away from her at a range of about a few meters.
<=-----=> Character History: Valla was born on Tawfret hundreds of years ago, part of an ancient race known as the Zeji. Trained from her teenage years to be a warrior, she hunted the infestors and occasionally the humans in the area around her home land, though otherwise didn't really do much. Eventually a cataclysmic event that nobody really understood happened, and she was frozen in stasis for hundreds of years alongside every surviving Zeji, eventually awakened by a group of people known as the Sons of Tawfret, led by a man known as Arcturus Horrigan. Recruited into their ranks, they fought to take the planet back from the Tawfret Empire, a faction of Federation deserters that decided to try to take over a planet. Fighting swarms of a race known as the Zuradin along the way. While unfreezing members of her race. Eventually they took back the world, forming the Tawfretian alliance that took in the Zeji Valla could find along with a brood of Zuradin controlled by an infested psychic human. Valla went her own way after that, leaving the world to explore the galaxy. Taking up bounty hunting as a simple-ish job that she could explore with. -Battle suit- Suit Type: Zeji Power suit Weaponry: Psi-powered shoulder cannon, blade emitters in the gauntlets. Shielding: Energy shielding, including a very strong hard light shield that emits from the left bracer at will. Shielding strong enough to even sustain against Phazon for limited amounts of time. Other/Description: A mask is constantly worn over her face, though it doesn't seem to have any function aside from protection from solid attacks. Stores her weapons and some items in a sort of pocket dimension. Has a personal teleporter that sends her back to a certain point if injured enough, usually her own ship though "save points" can be used for the same purpose. Another teleporter used to send bounties back to a cell on her ship. https://imgur.com/a/8W78OJs -Ship- Ship Name: Ship Type: Ancient Zeji Gunship Weapon Systems: Two photon cannons, a locked missile launcher, "smart" bomb launcher, and mining laser. Attachments: Shield generators, computer lock jammers(have a cooldown of 5 minutes), enhanced engines. Warm drive. Other: Aside from the cockpit, everything is inside a room in some sort of pocket dimension. Life support and emergency ration storage that lasts up to two weeks, warp drives. Constructor device that can be used to craft food, weapons, and even conduct repairs on the ship using raw materials. Scanner that can detect said materials. Cloaking tech, along with a trophy storage room and a few cells to store the occasional "alive" bounty.
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| Subject: Re: (Formerly Valla K'Sardis, working on a new name) Sat Mar 19, 2016 12:21 am | |
| Awesome. Now we just need to actually do the Tawfret RP. Then all will be perfect. | |
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| Subject: Re: (Formerly Valla K'Sardis, working on a new name) Thu Mar 31, 2016 2:35 pm | |
| I updated her to add a grapple beam(and a chain and spike for the Tawfret storyline), and changed the backstory. The surviving group is no longer called the militia, they're really just general scavengers that happen to also guard Sanctuary. I thought it was silly for a group established to not have very much ammo to actively go on raids against phazon beasts, when really such a group would be constantly on the defensive or at the very least using stealth instead. And I really just play them as general scavengers anyway. | |
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| Subject: Re: (Formerly Valla K'Sardis, working on a new name) Mon Apr 04, 2016 2:48 pm | |
| Updated. Mostly appearance stuff. | |
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| Subject: Re: (Formerly Valla K'Sardis, working on a new name) Fri Apr 29, 2016 1:39 pm | |
| Updated equipment, and put a notice saying her history is outdated. Will be redoing that later. | |
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| Subject: Re: (Formerly Valla K'Sardis, working on a new name) Mon May 02, 2016 4:01 pm | |
| I might drop the idea of a powersuit in general and just have her have a generic space suit for when she needs to enter vacuum. | |
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| Subject: Re: (Formerly Valla K'Sardis, working on a new name) Mon May 23, 2016 8:51 pm | |
| Why hasn't this been approved yet, there a problem with her or something? Just wondering. | |
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| Subject: Re: (Formerly Valla K'Sardis, working on a new name) Tue May 24, 2016 7:56 pm | |
| Slight appearance update. She's got scars all over her, just thought that'd be a cool detail for this kind of character.
Also updated the backstory. | |
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| Subject: Re: (Formerly Valla K'Sardis, working on a new name) Sun May 29, 2016 6:15 am | |
| Updated, replaced the powersuit entirely and dropped the laser wings. | |
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| Subject: Re: (Formerly Valla K'Sardis, working on a new name) Sun May 29, 2016 5:48 pm | |
| Minor appearance update(and huge suit description update). Just dropped the image references(Except the scars) and wrote a description myself. | |
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| Subject: Re: (Formerly Valla K'Sardis, working on a new name) Tue Jul 12, 2016 12:30 pm | |
| Just a thing, the Doomguy armor design is NOT the final design for Talon's suit. I'm still thinking of what it will look like, but that's just the working design. I also kinda had it in mind that it could easily be customized aesthetically. Like she could go into one mission with one design and go into another with another design, similar to an RPG protagonist changing their armor. But I dunno if that makes it too videogamey(or if that matters, we're on an RP site about Metroid after all) | |
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| Subject: Re: (Formerly Valla K'Sardis, working on a new name) Wed Jul 13, 2016 8:34 am | |
| Personally, I wouldn't think that would be too videogamey. I'd be fine with it, and honestly, I like the concept. | |
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| Subject: Re: (Formerly Valla K'Sardis, working on a new name) Wed Jul 13, 2016 4:38 pm | |
| I was thinking the default would end up being a less bulky design(based off my Hunter character in Destiny, who I based off her), with her trimming the bulk on the suit while keeping the same damage resistance just for the sake of better mobility. | |
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| Subject: Re: (Formerly Valla K'Sardis, working on a new name) Thu Jul 14, 2016 6:10 am | |
| It'd definitely help with my problem where I'm indecisive as hell about character design, at least armor-wise. | |
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| Subject: Re: (Formerly Valla K'Sardis, working on a new name) Fri Jul 15, 2016 1:10 am | |
| Added the modular appearance detail, and also added a throwing knife generator. She'll get it when they go back to report to Arcturus that the Leviathan is dead. | |
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| Subject: Re: (Formerly Valla K'Sardis, working on a new name) Sat Aug 06, 2016 2:16 pm | |
| Thinking of having Talon make her own mercenary group like I intended Talon Aran to(which is still canon) Or she'll just join the Blood Dragons, either one.
Edit: I think I'll go with her making one when Legacy era comes. Based off the MSF and Diamond Dogs from Metal Gear, more heavily than the Blood Dragons. With a space station with warp capability as the main base. Hell a thing with Legacy Era could be a bunch of mercenary groups becoming more prominent(and also fighting eachother) because of how weakened the Federation is by the Kriken invasion. | |
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| Subject: Re: (Formerly Valla K'Sardis, working on a new name) Wed Aug 10, 2016 7:25 pm | |
| Added image references again. Also changed her design a bit, her eyes are grey(in hindsight, why would Phazon mutation turn her eyes red? If anything they'd be blue, but I don't see why she'd be born with a different eye color) and she has arm tattoos. | |
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| Subject: Re: (Formerly Valla K'Sardis, working on a new name) Mon Aug 29, 2016 12:40 pm | |
| Slight retcon idea: Talon has a lot of cybernetic implants from her time on Tawfret, since I'm deciding there was more civilization on that planet than just the Authority owned cities(which outlaw cybernetic implants). It'd be the same place that Arcturus got fixed up(known as Augtown, an underground area) when he lost his arms and eye, since she gets hit by an exploding truck(or something along those lines) and her body can't fix the damage by itself in a reasonable amount of time. The place is also where the Sons of Tawfret get their voluntary cybernetics.
I was thinking her spine, rib cage, and a few internal organs would've been replaced, along with her eyes and having a reinforced skeleton to accommodate the augmentations, alongside a lot of other ones like a one that triggers a bullet time-style effect, poison filters, and more. Aesthetic wise, nothing's really changed except that her eyes look artificial if one looks closely enough. It'd explain why she's so relaxed about getting a new cybernetic arm in the zombie story, since she already has some augmentations. | |
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| Subject: Re: (Formerly Valla K'Sardis, working on a new name) Sat Sep 03, 2016 9:34 pm | |
| Added the cybernetics, and also changed the way her home is destroyed. While also changing how she gets her scars(and the reason she needs the cybernetics in the first place).
I might write out the scenario where she ends up in that situation as a separate story, I'll just say it's pretty much the situation in my avatar. | |
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| Subject: Re: (Formerly Valla K'Sardis, working on a new name) Thu Sep 29, 2016 1:38 pm | |
| I'm trying to remove the references to old Federation technology because I feel like Tawfret was away from the Federation for so long that they built up their own technology. The only Federation tech is used by the Authority, because a lot of them are former Federation and Boreale's command ship has a lot of equipment to go around. | |
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| Subject: Re: (Formerly Valla K'Sardis, working on a new name) Tue Oct 18, 2016 7:59 pm | |
| Updated her ship(with a placeholder name that I might change later, came from an in-joke related to the Mantis from The Old Republic). Now has an actual appearance and updated the weapons and stuff for it. | |
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| Subject: Re: (Formerly Valla K'Sardis, working on a new name) Sun Nov 20, 2016 3:12 am | |
| Idea: Instead of an energy shield, the cybernetic arm has a system similar to the Royal Guard ability from DMC, where it absorbs energy and can let it out in a blast(which is the beam weapon equivalent for the arm). It will have limits to this(no absorbing death star superlasers or anything on that level, and it'll probably have to let out energy to prevent overload so no storing it from one battle to the next) but it'll be a more offensive sort of shield that I think fits her a bit more. | |
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| Subject: Re: (Formerly Valla K'Sardis, working on a new name) Sun Nov 20, 2016 4:42 am | |
| STOP KILLING MY BABY! *Sob* | |
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| Subject: Re: (Formerly Valla K'Sardis, working on a new name) Sun Nov 20, 2016 5:31 am | |
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| Subject: Re: (Formerly Valla K'Sardis, working on a new name) Sun Nov 20, 2016 12:35 pm | |
| Okay, obviously some explanation is in order, I apologize for the easily misunderstood joke. Basically, you've been changing the design of this thing I created regardless of you, for the purpose of making it more fitting to her, in short, it wasn't originally designed for her. I made it before I gave it to her, I just thought it would be cool, interesting, and useful for the character. stuff like the shield change and the tech absorption modification...Look, I'm trying as hard as I can not to sound like an asshole (which I'm sure I do regardless), but in short, there was a reason this prosthetic series was outlawed and made illegal. I made it and made it and the backstory to it, and while putting some limits on it, or expanding on it in story style or so on, that's just fine (it fits with the concept of the tech), but you're retconning something I created and put out for Talon into something it's not. That kinda hurts, you know? | |
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