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PostSubject: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Thu Mar 17, 2016 3:01 am

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-Traits-
Character name: Talon Hawke
Race: Felirian
Age: Is about 25 when she leaves Treceran
Gender: Intersex, female gender.
Height: 5'11"
Weight: A bit heavy
Appearance: Tall with a muscular physique. Has long white hair and orange slitted eyes. Rather large breasted, covered in short greyish-white fur with black stripes, with pointy ears coming out of the top of her head. Has retractable claws instead of nails, on both her fingers and toes. Has a feline tail
Wears a Drakonian biotech power suit, with a leather jacket on over it unless she's got it all out, in which case she teleports the jacket away.
https://imgur.com/a/LEtrOwi Appearance gallery
Personality: The type who always likes a fun fight(to a point of not even using her suit if she feels like the fight won't be "fair" without them), easygoing but can also go berserk at a moment's notice depending on what happens.
Strengths: Her physiology gives her enhanced strength, speed, and regeneration(Which can be sped up by eating, something passed from her dragon DNA). Immortality(As in cannot die from age, due to her enhancements).  Can go into a berserker rage that makes her barely feel any sort of pain.
Weaknesses: She may be able to regenerate wounds, but she can be killed. Especially by decapitation. As for the rage ability, well there's a good reason pain is a thing.
Known Languages: Galactic standard, ancient Felirian. Has a universal translator implanted in her by Silas.
Other: Pansexual, homoromantic

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-Affiliation-
Faction/Organization: Bounty Hunter, formerly the Sons of Tawfret/Tawfretian Alliance/Empire
Alignment: Neutral

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-Misc.-
Other:
Equipment:
-Energy pistol: Based off Federation Chozotech, though weaker than the shoulder cannon. This was given to her by Silas rather than one of her own "traditional" weapons.
-Shoulder cannon: A small retractable cannon made from salvaged Chozo tech. Compatible with beam weapons and even missiles and grenades.
-A pump action plasma shotgun.
-Ripline: The Felirian equivalent to a grapple beam, though it's a physical chain that's sent out with a spike attached. Able to be used to grapple opponents.
-Whip: Is capable of using the Ripline as a whip, with a spiked ball or curved serrated blade at the tip. Able to be summoned in a chainlike or serrated way.
-Gravity boots: As a side effect of the technology in her runner suit, kicking enemies will basically disable gravity for them for a few seconds, causing them to float away, leaving them open for a followup attack. She keeps this even with her powersuit, as it's incredibly useful.
-A Felirian hunting bow: A bow with a superhuman-ly high draw strength, with multiple different kinds of arrows including explosive and poison.
-Gauntlet/Wrist computer(See suit for full details): A computer that she uses to control every bit of her suit, which can be configured to work off hand gestures or mental commands(An automatic trigger if her opposite hand is detected as missing). Remote controls things such as remote detonated explosives.
-Blade stick: A sort of staff with retractable blades all along it.
-Glaive disc: A three bladed disc that she is capable of controlling using the visor in her helmet or switching to an automatic heat seeking mode, retracts into a gauntlet until needed.
-Remote bombs: Handheld explosives able to be remotely detonated using her wrist computer. Will stick to most surfaces.
-Proximity mines: Like the remote bombs, but detonated by movement(Will detect the wrist computer of a Felirian and temporarily disarm if they are within the blast radius). Comes in explosive, laser, and even razornet flavors.


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Character History:

Talon was born on Tawfret, part of a tribal feline race known as the Felirians, trained from childhood to be a hunter and warrior, being considered worthy of being dragon-touched, which is when a Felirian warrior-hunter is infused with Draconic DNA and given their Hunter Suit. She hunted for years, at war with a tribe of lizard-like beings known as Saurians along with numerous other races, before some cataclysmic event happened, one that isn't quite properly recorded. The Felirians mostly put themselves into cryogenic stasis, coming out centuries later. Talon's pod was found by Arcturus Horrigan, a Saurian leader of a group known as the Sons of Tawfret, the resistance group uniting the Saurians and other races to fight the new human occupiers of the ruined world, a group of abandoned Federation Deserters that call themselves the Authority.

Arcturus Horrigan personally trained her for three years, teaching her how to use guns and even teaching her how to pilot fighters and cars, though she usually stuck to her own ancient traditions including using bows and blades. From then on she worked alongside an Altorian known as Silas Boreale, who crashed on the planet and needed her help to get off.

Eventually she came across a hidden Federation science lab, one that was abandoned. But there were logs left behind indicating that they found Felirian equipment, including her own personal hunter suit and took it to a base on Treceran. With this lead, she left the world with Silas, heading there to find what she needed.


-Battle suit-
Suit Name: Felirian Hunter Suit
Suit Type: Felirian Power Suit
Weaponry: Ripline emitters on wrists along with wrist blasters and wrist dart launchers(able to fire tranquilizing, toxic, shock, and corrosive darts). Retractable tail blade, wrist blades, and reinforcements to her natural claws. Retractable "wings" in the back that are more like bladed spike appendages with a sort of gravity cling, allowing her to stick to walls, trees, and more. Shoulder mounted chozo cannon.
Shielding: Energy shielding, including a very strong hard light shield that emits from the left bracer at will. Strong Phazon shielding
Other/Description: A piece of ancient Felirian technology recovered deep from Tawfret. Due to the race's old work with the Chozo, it is capable of integrating technology from them, in addition to Federation and Space Pirate tech. It seems to be metal armor(ranging from bits and pieces of armor to a full plate) that can be summoned and dismissed at will, along with a black undersuit that is even able to shift into a kind of netlike pattern, if needed to vent heat. It can be worn under clothing, though if it comes to its fully armored form it could potentially rip it. Can materialize a helmet and seal itself in vacuum. The suit bonds with the wearer, in a way where it can only be forcibly removed surgically, though it can be disabled and removed if the wearer wills it. Multiple visors(Scan, Thermal, X-Ray, Survival scanner(Able to detect materials needed for survival, such as food and things required for repairs) and translation devices, with the visors also able to be deployed through "glasses" that the suit materializes, though she usually wears the helmet. Cloaking technology.

Other tech:
 

-Battle suit 2-
Suit Name: Juggernaut
Suit Type: Tawfretian Alliance experimental xenotech mech suit
Weaponry: A mech-sized plasma shotgun, dual plasma gatling repeaters, missile launchers(both arm mounted and shoulder mounted), a large power sword, and a beam cannon with a switchable energy beam that can be overcharged to fire an extremely powerful beam of energy at the cost of the mech's shields needing to recharge afterward. All of which can be switched out(though only three at a time can be out, two hands and one shoulder mounted which would always be missiles)
Shielding: Chozo grade shielding. Extremely durable armor.
Other: Has jump jets and boosters that can be used for a quick jump or dash. Has a cooldown time of 10 seconds.
Image: https://i.imgur.com/3FAEUzU.jpg

-Ship-
Ship Name: The Vanguard
Ship Type: Firefly class frigate
Weapon Systems: Laser and missile cannons, high power energy turret under the cockpit. Tractor beam.
Attachments: Enhanced shield generators, enhanced warp drive. "Dumb" Artificial intelligence that manages repair bots and autopilot along with internal auto turrets. Cargo hold doubles as a brig when needed.
Other: Hangar that can hold up to 12 fighters, 6 shuttles, or some combination of them. Normally holds 6 fighters and a couple shuttles.
Images: https://i.imgur.com/osJ9daF.jpg
Registered to the Name of: Talon Hawke

-Ship 2-
Ship Name: Tiger's Claw
Ship Type: Tawfretian Starfighter
Weapon Systems: Two photon cannons, a locked missile launcher, "smart" bomb launcher, and mining laser.
Attachments: Shield generators, computer lock jammers(have a cooldown of 5 minutes), enhanced engines.
Other: Life support and emergency ration storage that lasts up to two weeks, warp drives. Constructor device that can be used to craft food, weapons, and even conduct repairs on the ship using raw materials. Scanner that can detect said materials.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Sat Mar 19, 2016 12:21 am

Awesome. Now we just need to actually do the Tawfret RP. Then all will be perfect.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Thu Mar 31, 2016 2:35 pm

I updated her to add a grapple beam(and a chain and spike for the Tawfret storyline), and changed the backstory. The surviving group is no longer called the militia, they're really just general scavengers that happen to also guard Sanctuary. I thought it was silly for a group established to not have very much ammo to actively go on raids against phazon beasts, when really such a group would be constantly on the defensive or at the very least using stealth instead.
And I really just play them as general scavengers anyway.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Mon Apr 04, 2016 2:48 pm

Updated. Mostly appearance stuff.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Fri Apr 29, 2016 1:39 pm

Updated equipment, and put a notice saying her history is outdated. Will be redoing that later.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Mon May 02, 2016 4:01 pm

I might drop the idea of a powersuit in general and just have her have a generic space suit for when she needs to enter vacuum.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Mon May 23, 2016 8:51 pm

Why hasn't this been approved yet, there a problem with her or something? Just wondering.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Tue May 24, 2016 7:56 pm

Slight appearance update. She's got scars all over her, just thought that'd be a cool detail for this kind of character.

Also updated the backstory.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Sun May 29, 2016 6:15 am

Updated, replaced the powersuit entirely and dropped the laser wings.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Sun May 29, 2016 5:48 pm

Minor appearance update(and huge suit description update).
Just dropped the image references(Except the scars) and wrote a description myself.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Tue Jul 12, 2016 12:30 pm

Just a thing, the Doomguy armor design is NOT the final design for Talon's suit. I'm still thinking of what it will look like, but that's just the working design.
I also kinda had it in mind that it could easily be customized aesthetically. Like she could go into one mission with one design and go into another with another design, similar to an RPG protagonist changing their armor. But I dunno if that makes it too videogamey(or if that matters, we're on an RP site about Metroid after all)

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Wed Jul 13, 2016 8:34 am

Personally, I wouldn't think that would be too videogamey. I'd be fine with it, and honestly, I like the concept.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Wed Jul 13, 2016 4:38 pm

I was thinking the default would end up being a less bulky design(based off my Hunter character in Destiny, who I based off her), with her trimming the bulk on the suit while keeping the same damage resistance just for the sake of better mobility.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Thu Jul 14, 2016 6:10 am

It'd definitely help with my problem where I'm indecisive as hell about character design, at least armor-wise.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Fri Jul 15, 2016 1:10 am

Added the modular appearance detail, and also added a throwing knife generator. She'll get it when they go back to report to Arcturus that the Leviathan is dead.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Sat Aug 06, 2016 2:16 pm

Thinking of having Talon make her own mercenary group like I intended Talon Aran to(which is still canon)
Or she'll just join the Blood Dragons, either one.

Edit: I think I'll go with her making one when Legacy era comes. Based off the MSF and Diamond Dogs from Metal Gear, more heavily than the Blood Dragons. With a space station with warp capability as the main base. Hell a thing with Legacy Era could be a bunch of mercenary groups becoming more prominent(and also fighting eachother) because of how weakened the Federation is by the Kriken invasion.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Wed Aug 10, 2016 7:25 pm

Added image references again. Also changed her design a bit, her eyes are grey(in hindsight, why would Phazon mutation turn her eyes red? If anything they'd be blue, but I don't see why she'd be born with a different eye color) and she has arm tattoos.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Mon Aug 29, 2016 12:40 pm

Slight retcon idea: Talon has a lot of cybernetic implants from her time on Tawfret, since I'm deciding there was more civilization on that planet than just the Authority owned cities(which outlaw cybernetic implants). It'd be the same place that Arcturus got fixed up(known as Augtown, an underground area) when he lost his arms and eye, since she gets hit by an exploding truck(or something along those lines) and her body can't fix the damage by itself in a reasonable amount of time. The place is also where the Sons of Tawfret get their voluntary cybernetics.

I was thinking her spine, rib cage, and a few internal organs would've been replaced, along with her eyes and having a reinforced skeleton to accommodate the augmentations, alongside a lot of other ones like a one that triggers a bullet time-style effect, poison filters, and more. Aesthetic wise, nothing's really changed except that her eyes look artificial if one looks closely enough. It'd explain why she's so relaxed about getting a new cybernetic arm in the zombie story, since she already has some augmentations.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Sat Sep 03, 2016 9:34 pm

Added the cybernetics, and also changed the way her home is destroyed. While also changing how she gets her scars(and the reason she needs the cybernetics in the first place).

I might write out the scenario where she ends up in that situation as a separate story, I'll just say it's pretty much the situation in my avatar.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Thu Sep 29, 2016 1:38 pm

I'm trying to remove the references to old Federation technology because I feel like Tawfret was away from the Federation for so long that they built up their own technology.
The only Federation tech is used by the Authority, because a lot of them are former Federation and Boreale's command ship has a lot of equipment to go around.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Tue Oct 18, 2016 7:59 pm

Updated her ship(with a placeholder name that I might change later, came from an in-joke related to the Mantis from The Old Republic). Now has an actual appearance and updated the weapons and stuff for it.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Sun Nov 20, 2016 3:12 am

Idea: Instead of an energy shield, the cybernetic arm has a system similar to the Royal Guard ability from DMC, where it absorbs energy and can let it out in a blast(which is the beam weapon equivalent for the arm).
It will have limits to this(no absorbing death star superlasers or anything on that level, and it'll probably have to let out energy to prevent overload so no storing it from one battle to the next) but it'll be a more offensive sort of shield that I think fits her a bit more.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Sun Nov 20, 2016 4:42 am

STOP KILLING MY BABY! *Sob*

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Sun Nov 20, 2016 5:31 am

Wait what?

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Sun Nov 20, 2016 12:35 pm

Okay, obviously some explanation is in order, I apologize for the easily misunderstood joke. Basically, you've been changing the design of this thing I created regardless of you, for the purpose of making it more fitting to her, in short, it wasn't originally designed for her. I made it before I gave it to her, I just thought it would be cool, interesting, and useful for the character. stuff like the shield change and the tech absorption modification...Look, I'm trying as hard as I can not to sound like an asshole (which I'm sure I do regardless), but in short, there was a reason this prosthetic series was outlawed and made illegal. I made it and made it and the backstory to it, and while putting some limits on it, or expanding on it in story style or so on, that's just fine (it fits with the concept of the tech), but you're retconning something I created and put out for Talon into something it's not. That kinda hurts, you know?

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