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PostSubject: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Thu Mar 17, 2016 3:01 am

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Character name: Talon Hawke
Race: Felirian
Age: Is about 25 when she leaves Treceran
Gender: Intersex, female gender.
Height: 7 feet tall
Weight: A bit heavy
Appearance: Tall with a muscular physique. Has long white hair and orange slitted eyes. Rather large breasted, covered in short greyish-white fur with black stripes, with pointy ears coming out of the top of her head. Has retractable claws instead of nails, on both her fingers and toes. Has a feline tail
Wears a Drakonian biotech power suit, with a leather jacket on over it unless she's got it all out, in which case she teleports the jacket away.
https://imgur.com/a/LEtrOwi Appearance gallery
Personality: The type who always likes a fun fight(to a point of not even using her suit if she feels like the fight won't be "fair" without them), easygoing but can also go berserk at a moment's notice depending on what happens.
Strengths: Her physiology gives her enhanced strength, speed, and regeneration(Which can be sped up by eating, something passed from her dragon DNA). Immortality(As in cannot die from age, due to a trait of her subrace).  Can go into a berserker rage that makes her barely feel any sort of pain.
Weaknesses: She may be able to regenerate wounds, but she can be killed. Especially by decapitation. As for the rage ability, well there's a good reason pain is a thing.
Known Languages: Galactic standard, ancient Tawfretian. Has a universal translator in her power suit when it's given to her by Silas
Other: Pansexual, homoromantic

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-Affiliation-
Faction/Organization: Bounty Hunter, formerly the Sons of Tawfret/Tawfretian Alliance
Alignment: Neutral

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-Misc.-
Other:
Equipment:
-Two customized energy pistols, made using the xenotech(The Tawfret term for Elven or Chozo tech) found on the planet. Have charge beam functionality and compatibility with Chozo beam tech.
-A pump action plasma shotgun.
-A Drakonian Biotech assault rifle, can use a good amount of ammo to fire a charged laser blast and convert to a sniper rifle on mental command.
-Ripline: The Felirian equivalent to a grapple beam, though it's a physical rope that's sent out with a spike attached.
-Whip beam: Is capable of using the Ripline as a whip
-Grapple leash, a function of the grapple beam. Is capable of pulling enemies towards her or explosively slamming them on the ground.
-Gravity boots: As a side effect of the technology in her runner suit, kicking enemies will basically disable gravity for them for a few seconds, causing them to float away, leaving them open for a followup attack. She keeps this even with her powersuit, as it's incredibly useful.


Tawfret storyline equipment:
 


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Character History:

Talon was born on Tawfret, part of a tribal feline race known as the Felirians, trained from childhood to be a hunter and warrior, being considered worthy of being dragon-touched, which is when a Felirian warrior-hunter is infused with Draconic DNA and given their Drakesuit. Unfortunately right before she would have gotten it, a something happened and she and most others were brought underground and locked away in cryostasis to survive. She was locked away until she was found by a group of wanderers, though everyone else that was sealed away wasn't so lucky. One day, they came across a group of insane raiders, who killed basically her entire group, with her being the only one left alive. Due to her abilities, she was able to take out the whole raider group, with a group of Sons of Tawfret coming along to take her in, having heard the conflict going on from outside.

Arcturus Horrigan personally trained her for three years, teaching her how to use guns and even teaching her how to pilot fighters and cars. She was sent on a few recon missions, but one day she was sent on a mission. Take out the main base of the raiders who killed her friends. She succeeded.

Eventually she came across a hidden Federation science lab, one that was abandoned. But there were logs left behind indicating that they found Felirian equipment, including the suit that was assigned to her, and took it to a base on Treceran. With this lead, she left the world with Silas Boreale, heading there to find what she needed.


-Battle suit-
Suit Name: Drakesuit
Suit Type: Drakonian Power Suit
Weaponry: Able to fire force blasts from the hands. Grapple beam emitters on wrists. Often kept on her hands as a sort of knuckle reinforcement in combat. Retractable tail blade, wrist blades, and reinforcements to her natural claws. Retractable "wings" in the back that are more like bladed spike appendages.
Shielding: Energy shielding, including a very strong hard light shield that emits from the left bracer at will. Strong Phazon shielding
Other/Description: A piece of ancient Drakonian technology recovered deep from Tawfret. Due to the race's old work with the Chozo, it is capable of integrating technology from them, in addition to Federation and Space Pirate tech. It appears to be a variety of organic scales, which can be materialized at will, though the interior is surprisingly comfortable. It can be worn under clothing, though if it comes to its fully armored form it could potentially rip it. Can materialize a helmet and seal itself in vacuum. The suit bonds with the wearer, in a way where it can only be forcibly removed surgically, though it can be disabled.  Multiple visors and translation devices, with the visors also able to be deployed through "glasses" that the suit materializes, though she usually wears the helmet.
Image of the suit: https://imgur.com/a/eqIxE8R

Other tech:
 

-Battle suit 2-
Suit Name: Juggernaut
Suit Type: Tawfretian Alliance experimental xenotech mech suit
Weaponry: A mech-sized plasma shotgun, dual plasma gatling repeaters, missile launchers(both arm mounted and shoulder mounted), a large power sword, and a beam cannon with a switchable energy beam that can be overcharged to fire an extremely powerful beam of energy at the cost of the mech's shields needing to recharge afterward. All of which can be switched out(though only three at a time can be out, two hands and one shoulder mounted which would always be missiles)
Shielding: Chozo grade shielding. Extremely durable armor.
Other: Has jump jets and boosters that can be used for a quick jump or dash. Has a cooldown time of 10 seconds.
Image: https://i.imgur.com/3FAEUzU.jpg


Tawfret story:
 

-Ship-
Ship Name: The Mantis
Ship Type: Firefly class space transport
Weapon Systems: Laser and missile turrets on the "wings", high power energy turret under the cockpit.
Attachments: Enhanced shield generators, enhanced warp drive. "Dumb" Artificial intelligence that manages repair bots and autopilot along with auto turrets. Cargo hold doubles as a brig when needed.
Other: Has a severed prosthetic arm sitting on a table in Talon's quarters,
Images: http://imgur.com/a/sZIHL
Registered to the Name of: Talon Hawke

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Sat Mar 19, 2016 12:21 am

Awesome. Now we just need to actually do the Tawfret RP. Then all will be perfect.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Thu Mar 31, 2016 2:35 pm

I updated her to add a grapple beam(and a chain and spike for the Tawfret storyline), and changed the backstory. The surviving group is no longer called the militia, they're really just general scavengers that happen to also guard Sanctuary. I thought it was silly for a group established to not have very much ammo to actively go on raids against phazon beasts, when really such a group would be constantly on the defensive or at the very least using stealth instead.
And I really just play them as general scavengers anyway.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Mon Apr 04, 2016 2:48 pm

Updated. Mostly appearance stuff.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Fri Apr 29, 2016 1:39 pm

Updated equipment, and put a notice saying her history is outdated. Will be redoing that later.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Mon May 02, 2016 4:01 pm

I might drop the idea of a powersuit in general and just have her have a generic space suit for when she needs to enter vacuum.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Mon May 23, 2016 8:51 pm

Why hasn't this been approved yet, there a problem with her or something? Just wondering.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Tue May 24, 2016 7:56 pm

Slight appearance update. She's got scars all over her, just thought that'd be a cool detail for this kind of character.

Also updated the backstory.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Sun May 29, 2016 6:15 am

Updated, replaced the powersuit entirely and dropped the laser wings.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Sun May 29, 2016 5:48 pm

Minor appearance update(and huge suit description update).
Just dropped the image references(Except the scars) and wrote a description myself.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Tue Jul 12, 2016 12:30 pm

Just a thing, the Doomguy armor design is NOT the final design for Talon's suit. I'm still thinking of what it will look like, but that's just the working design.
I also kinda had it in mind that it could easily be customized aesthetically. Like she could go into one mission with one design and go into another with another design, similar to an RPG protagonist changing their armor. But I dunno if that makes it too videogamey(or if that matters, we're on an RP site about Metroid after all)

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Wed Jul 13, 2016 8:34 am

Personally, I wouldn't think that would be too videogamey. I'd be fine with it, and honestly, I like the concept.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Wed Jul 13, 2016 4:38 pm

I was thinking the default would end up being a less bulky design(based off my Hunter character in Destiny, who I based off her), with her trimming the bulk on the suit while keeping the same damage resistance just for the sake of better mobility.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Thu Jul 14, 2016 6:10 am

It'd definitely help with my problem where I'm indecisive as hell about character design, at least armor-wise.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Fri Jul 15, 2016 1:10 am

Added the modular appearance detail, and also added a throwing knife generator. She'll get it when they go back to report to Arcturus that the Leviathan is dead.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Sat Aug 06, 2016 2:16 pm

Thinking of having Talon make her own mercenary group like I intended Talon Aran to(which is still canon)
Or she'll just join the Blood Dragons, either one.

Edit: I think I'll go with her making one when Legacy era comes. Based off the MSF and Diamond Dogs from Metal Gear, more heavily than the Blood Dragons. With a space station with warp capability as the main base. Hell a thing with Legacy Era could be a bunch of mercenary groups becoming more prominent(and also fighting eachother) because of how weakened the Federation is by the Kriken invasion.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Wed Aug 10, 2016 7:25 pm

Added image references again. Also changed her design a bit, her eyes are grey(in hindsight, why would Phazon mutation turn her eyes red? If anything they'd be blue, but I don't see why she'd be born with a different eye color) and she has arm tattoos.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Mon Aug 29, 2016 12:40 pm

Slight retcon idea: Talon has a lot of cybernetic implants from her time on Tawfret, since I'm deciding there was more civilization on that planet than just the Authority owned cities(which outlaw cybernetic implants). It'd be the same place that Arcturus got fixed up(known as Augtown, an underground area) when he lost his arms and eye, since she gets hit by an exploding truck(or something along those lines) and her body can't fix the damage by itself in a reasonable amount of time. The place is also where the Sons of Tawfret get their voluntary cybernetics.

I was thinking her spine, rib cage, and a few internal organs would've been replaced, along with her eyes and having a reinforced skeleton to accommodate the augmentations, alongside a lot of other ones like a one that triggers a bullet time-style effect, poison filters, and more. Aesthetic wise, nothing's really changed except that her eyes look artificial if one looks closely enough. It'd explain why she's so relaxed about getting a new cybernetic arm in the zombie story, since she already has some augmentations.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Sat Sep 03, 2016 9:34 pm

Added the cybernetics, and also changed the way her home is destroyed. While also changing how she gets her scars(and the reason she needs the cybernetics in the first place).

I might write out the scenario where she ends up in that situation as a separate story, I'll just say it's pretty much the situation in my avatar.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Thu Sep 29, 2016 1:38 pm

I'm trying to remove the references to old Federation technology because I feel like Tawfret was away from the Federation for so long that they built up their own technology.
The only Federation tech is used by the Authority, because a lot of them are former Federation and Boreale's command ship has a lot of equipment to go around.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Tue Oct 18, 2016 7:59 pm

Updated her ship(with a placeholder name that I might change later, came from an in-joke related to the Mantis from The Old Republic). Now has an actual appearance and updated the weapons and stuff for it.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Sun Nov 20, 2016 3:12 am

Idea: Instead of an energy shield, the cybernetic arm has a system similar to the Royal Guard ability from DMC, where it absorbs energy and can let it out in a blast(which is the beam weapon equivalent for the arm).
It will have limits to this(no absorbing death star superlasers or anything on that level, and it'll probably have to let out energy to prevent overload so no storing it from one battle to the next) but it'll be a more offensive sort of shield that I think fits her a bit more.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Sun Nov 20, 2016 4:42 am

STOP KILLING MY BABY! *Sob*

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Sun Nov 20, 2016 5:31 am

Wait what?

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, The Felirian   Sun Nov 20, 2016 12:35 pm

Okay, obviously some explanation is in order, I apologize for the easily misunderstood joke. Basically, you've been changing the design of this thing I created regardless of you, for the purpose of making it more fitting to her, in short, it wasn't originally designed for her. I made it before I gave it to her, I just thought it would be cool, interesting, and useful for the character. stuff like the shield change and the tech absorption modification...Look, I'm trying as hard as I can not to sound like an asshole (which I'm sure I do regardless), but in short, there was a reason this prosthetic series was outlawed and made illegal. I made it and made it and the backstory to it, and while putting some limits on it, or expanding on it in story style or so on, that's just fine (it fits with the concept of the tech), but you're retconning something I created and put out for Talon into something it's not. That kinda hurts, you know?

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