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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, Tawfret Survivor   Sun Nov 20, 2016 2:31 pm

I didn't know that at all. I thought it was cool it's just the instant tech absorption was a bit much and I have a habit of toning down powers to not feel too OP. I'm trying to match her up a bit more with her TFRP version(who I'm giving a royal guard equivalent to too) Though maybe instead of retconning the shield and beam entirely it's just a new setting she acquired that she prefers.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, Tawfret Survivor   Mon Nov 21, 2016 4:41 am

Perfectly feasible for the arm based on the original concept.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, Tawfret Survivor   Mon Nov 21, 2016 3:33 pm

-Energy absorber: Also known as the guard module, is able to absorb energy(whether kinetic or otherwise) by blocking with the arm, which charges up her beam weapon to release it on her enemy. This has boundaries and it takes perfect timing to pull off, with the wrong timing leading to either a miss(which will just make things worse than simply blocking it with a shield or dodging) or absorbing a low amount of energy. Its limit in terms of energy absorption is about a super missile level, and something like a human punch doesn't give her enough energy to really do anything useful(though it is an effective method of blocking)
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, Tawfret Survivor   Sat Jan 14, 2017 7:38 pm

I dropped the whole reinforced skeleton concept, but I'm keeping the other cybernetics. I think it's a bit silly the more I think about it, especially since her bone damage can be fixed in the same timeframe by just holding her unconscious and letting her regeneration work for a month, and her regeneration would make giving her a full body aug like that an absolute bitch. She is also an Elven alien, I should write a list of different species the planet has because it's no longer human-centric. At least one of them will be something Orcish, though I'm gonna try to do more than just make them fantasy races.
There are still (mutated) humans, with Arcturus still being one of them.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, Tawfret Survivor   Fri May 19, 2017 11:43 am

Hawke is now a psionic, and her backstory was updated with stories I wrote.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, Tawfret Survivor   Sat Jun 17, 2017 3:05 pm

I'm considering dropping the prosthetic arm(with it being explained as her body rejecting the arm, and her arm attempting to grow back which ends up fully happening when she has her healing factor artificially sped up, which also causes her scarring to disappear) and definitely adding a weakness where her prosthetic eyes aren't exactly perfect, enhancing her perception of light but also being incredibly sensitive to it as a drawback.


Edit: She'd also get them replaced with better ones, but keep wearing sunglasses either to not have her prosthetics(which look human with techy bits on them which could unsettle some people) be visible, make it hard for people to see what she's looking at, or just because she thinks they look cool.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, Tawfret Survivor   Sat Jun 24, 2017 3:52 pm

I dropped the idea of her wearing sunglasses after the Tawfret story due to light sensitivity, just because it seems pointless and I already got Locke for "cyborg who always wears sunglasses" plus I'd have to retcon more than I want to.

Also I'm working on rewording the arm abilities as if they're abilities of a suit, including the plasma cannon causes the arm firing it to protrude out to make a cannon(kinda like how the arm cannon widens when different beams are used)
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, Tawfret Survivor   Mon Jun 26, 2017 10:35 am

So time manipulation(since I gave it to her on the Total Fantasy site): Good idea or ridiculously overpowered?
It'd just be slowing and stopping it, I feel like the explanation would be an experimental device that gets installed in her suit.
My reasoning for thinking it'd be okay is that Castlevania protagonists can stop time and nobody questions it.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, Tawfret Survivor   Mon Jun 26, 2017 12:48 pm

Here though, I think it could and probably would be too OP. I advise against it.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, Tawfret Survivor   Mon Jun 26, 2017 1:07 pm

Yeah I can't really think of a way she'd get a time device(that wouldn't cause the entire fucking galaxy to go after her to claim it for themselves) now that I actually thought about it.
TFRP and Metroid Hawke are different enough that I shouldn't try to equalize them anyway.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, Tawfret Survivor   Mon Jun 26, 2017 2:12 pm

Yeaahh, those too.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Hawke, Tawfret Survivor   Thu Jul 13, 2017 3:51 pm

I brought back the concept of her internal organs being enhanced cybernetics, and made her extremely pale, mostly to put her closer to the TFRP version without going too far with it.


Edit: Though I'm not bringing back the reinforced skeleton idea, I think it was a bit too out there and she could just as easily have a stronger skeleton(that can regenerate) due to her mutated physiology.
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