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PostSubject: Subject M-23   Sun Jun 12, 2016 6:44 am

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-Traits-
Character name: Subject M-23 (self given name is Aquila, (pronounced A-quil-a))

Race: Human/Metroid (I guess...)
Age: Doesn't really have an age, appears to be in her 20's
Gender:Female
Height: 5' 9"
Weight: 190lbs
Appearance: Long Brown Hair, Dark Blue Eyes, she is very pale,
Personality: she is always seaching for answers she asks why this or what that to a lot of stuff, she really just wants to know why is there life.
Strengths: She can Latch onto things and drain their energy like a metroid, she can also 'see' creature's 'life force', she is very flexible and acrobic,

Weaknesses: Very weak to cold temperatures. Can lose control of her Metroid Powers when under a lot of stress or is scared.
Likes: Knowledge
Dislikes: immoral decisions
Known Languages:English


-Affiliation-
Faction/Organization: None.
Alignment: Good, cares for life.

-Misc.-
Other:
Equipment:

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Character History: Was created sometime after Metroid Fusion by the Federation. Her genetic makeup is unknown to most who worked on the project, but it is rumored that she is more than half Metroid and only has enough human DNA to have a Human appearance and mind. She was very curious and wanted to know about everything, this led her to discover what the Galactic Federation had been doing and she couldn't stand it. One day she managed to escape from the Federation.

-Battle suit-
Suit Name: Metroid Battle Suit
Suit Type: Custom Suit
Weaponry: A basic power beam is really the only weapon, however the suit is designed to allow Aquila to use her Metroid powers.
Upgrades: Grapple Beam
Shielding:Gravity Boaster
Visors: Scan Visor and Combat Visor, (She also has the Energy 'Visor', but it isn't really a suit Visor since it is one of her natural abilities.)

-Alt Form-
Alt Form Name: N/A
Description: N/A
Abilities/Weapons: N/A

-Ship-
Ship Name: The Lost Vessel
Ship Type: Modified Federation Ship
Weapon Systems: Missiles, Power-bomb launcher, Laser Cannons,
Attachments: Grapple beam

Timelime:

Not as Long as Slyix's because I haven't RPed much with her. I do hope I get to RP more with her.

Aquila is Created in a lab, She is nicknamed the Perfect Subject by Slyix (The leader of Project Fusion) as she is perfectly healthly.

Aquila starts to be curious about her surroundings as she is tested by Scientists. She eventually names herself Aquila after a Book Character.

A creature Known as Rowan attacks the station. During the Choas, Aquila discovers info on the previous 22 Subjects and is horrified at the experiments going on. She starts to want to escape.

During the encounter with Rowan, Aquila discovers her Metroid abilities, that she can see Life Energy and she can drain it like a Metroid.

After Rowan leaves, Slyix is paralysed with no Federation Forces in sight, allowing Aquila to escape in a Federation Ship (Thankfully for her, it had auto Pilot.she could use until learning how to fly a ship)


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PostSubject: Re: Subject M-23   Sun Jun 12, 2016 1:29 pm

None of these are really things against the character, just pointing a few things out. First, what kind of good? We typically run on a similar system to the D&D alignments, which include three good based alignments: Lawful Good (The "goodest", or "True Good" by most views), Neutral Good, and Chaotic Good (Does good, but does it in their own way for their own reasons most of the time. A kind of anti-hero alignment or just someone who has a good viewpoint, but doesn't follow codes and prefers to run with what's happening). Second, if her suit is custom made, then that would be the suit type, I would personally put down "Custom powered exoskeleton" or something along those lines, but the suit would be classified as "Custom" usually. And third (probably final, I don't think anything else has a reason to be mentioned other than typos and stuff), if she doesn't have and Alt. Form, then just don't add the section yet. If she ever acquires one, then would be the time to put it in. Again, none of these are really judgements on the character (Who I think is pretty well fine personally), but more just mentioning a few things that I feel had/have reason to be mentioned, the last one really being something that can save you a bit of time and effort (not much, but still), and maybe provide some ideas and a bit of definition to things that could hopefully help.

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PostSubject: Re: Subject M-23   Sun Jun 12, 2016 1:37 pm

I never really thought of what kind of good she is. I guess she is good in a moral way. She ran from the federation because they were experimenting with various DNA (mostly Metroid) on creatures in inhuman ways, kinda like space pirate did with phazon. She IS Subject #23, meaning 22 came before her and probably met the same fate as some early Elite Pirates.
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PostSubject: Re: Subject M-23   Sun Jun 12, 2016 1:38 pm

AND thanks for the suggestion with the suit...
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PostSubject: Re: Subject M-23   Sun Jun 12, 2016 1:44 pm

Well, that would probably be pretty close to Lawful Good, a follower of a code, the righteous crusader, the Paladin for example. In fact, in D&D law, Paladins have to be Lawful Good, and if they become any other alignment, then they lose their paladin abilities (Though most DMs will allow a Paladin to be the same alignment as their deity). Eh, pretty well unrelated, sorry. But, yeah, probably closest to Lawful Good.
And you're welcome (Sorry I forgot to put that in earlier, I was in teacher mode, whether it was needed/wanted or not)

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PostSubject: Re: Subject M-23   Mon Jun 19, 2017 3:32 pm

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