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PostSubject: Elysia Risna   Sun Jul 18, 2010 8:32 am

(Named for the awesomest planet in Metroid, yah.)

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Character name: Elysia Risna
Race: Caucasian
Age: 27
Gender: Female
Height: 5' 4"
Weight: 130 lbs
Appearance: Straight brown hair to shoulders, eyes the color of Vertigo Phazon. Wears a federation trooper's suit with PED.
Known Languages: English, Space Pirate
Faction/Organization: Federation
Alignment: Neutral
Personality: Outgoing and often violent.
Strengths: Very quick and strong fighter.
Weaknesses: Phazon enhancement has made her flesh too hot to to put anything more than cloth on for proper thermostasis, and therefore in not often able to wear sufficient armor.
Likes/Dislikes:
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Equipment: PED,
Character History: Former federation trooper. Became independent after being captured by pirates and experimented upon, mostly with vertigo phazon and other substances


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PostSubject: Re: Elysia Risna   Sun Jul 18, 2010 8:39 am

got this one all set up for the rp eh?
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PostSubject: Re: Elysia Risna   Sun Jul 18, 2010 8:46 am

Yeah. She's from an original fic of mine, along with Rosalia.
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PostSubject: Re: Elysia Risna   Sun Jul 18, 2010 8:47 am

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PostSubject: Re: Elysia Risna   Sun Jul 18, 2010 1:01 pm

Only problem I see is that there is no listed weakness. Likes and dislikes would be kinda nice too.

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PostSubject: Re: Elysia Risna   Sun Jul 18, 2010 1:06 pm

There isn't? I thought I put "hastily gets into sticky situations" or something of the sort.

Oh well. *edit'd*
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PostSubject: Re: Elysia Risna   Sun Jul 18, 2010 3:14 pm

I dunno if that would be considered a weakness.

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PostSubject: Re: Elysia Risna   Mon Jul 19, 2010 3:39 pm

Fine. Her weakness is anything that will make her bloody heart stop.

Did you expect Kryptonite or something?
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PostSubject: Re: Elysia Risna   Mon Jul 19, 2010 11:20 pm

This character would be kinda nice to pull into Corrupted. Think you'd be up for entering her as a side character? I'd enjoy that greatly if you can- if approved, of course.

Also, I noticed the description has her wearing a PED suit. Yet, in equipment, there's nothing.

Typo?
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PostSubject: Re: Elysia Risna   Tue Jul 20, 2010 5:45 am

I figured the PED wouldn't need a description since it's described in the games.

but yeah, I suppose you're right.
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PostSubject: Re: Elysia Risna   Wed Jul 21, 2010 4:22 am

So how about jumping in on Corrupted?
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PostSubject: Re: Elysia Risna   Wed Jul 21, 2010 5:13 am

Eh. If nobody finds a problem with "Anything that can kill a normal person", then yes.
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PostSubject: Re: Elysia Risna   Wed Jul 21, 2010 5:29 am

Well, I'll have to wait on adding you, unless you're in the char list already.
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PostSubject: Re: Elysia Risna   Wed Jul 21, 2010 5:30 am

Pretty much everything has those "weaknesses." Give me something else.

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PostSubject: Re: Elysia Risna   Wed Jul 21, 2010 5:42 am

May I suggest 'Corrupted Phazon'? You know, Dark Samus' phazon?
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PostSubject: Re: Elysia Risna   Wed Jul 21, 2010 9:32 am

I think you're trusting your cliches a bit much. Does it have to be a substance? I've already listed a mental weakness and a physical one.
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PostSubject: Re: Elysia Risna   Fri Jul 23, 2010 10:02 am

I'm just looking at it in the perspective that Elysia is not like a normal trooper anymore. She is now altered, and with that there should be strengths and weaknesses. These usually have to be physical, so they could potentially be exploited in combat. that's what makes a balanced character- a chink in their armor.
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PostSubject: Re: Elysia Risna   Fri Jul 23, 2010 10:59 am

Doesn't everybody have bullets? Or plasma beams? Or mines?

It's even disjunctive. Most people only have a weak spot up the ass or something. You're pretty much asking me to have less of a weakness by having a more specific one.
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PostSubject: Re: Elysia Risna   Fri Jul 23, 2010 11:24 am

But would that REALLY be all that bad?
I mean, really?
If you just specified one or two things that deal crit dam almost every time, I think that's what they need.
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PostSubject: Re: Elysia Risna   Fri Jul 23, 2010 11:53 am

That's... kind of illogical.

Humans don't have weak points. That's for giant enemy crabs.
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PostSubject: Re: Elysia Risna   Mon Jul 26, 2010 4:56 am

But you are no longer human!!! You, like the pirates, have become corrupted, and therefore should have something wrong with you.

And Giant Enemy Crabs?!? Really?!?
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PostSubject: Re: Elysia Risna   Mon Jul 26, 2010 1:56 pm

You got somthing against crabs.

*Grabs Crowbar*

ME TOO!!!!!

*Hits headcrab with crowbar*
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PostSubject: Re: Elysia Risna   Mon Jul 26, 2010 3:09 pm

Samuel Redford wrote:
But you are no longer human!!! You, like the pirates, have become corrupted, and therefore should have something wrong with you.

And Giant Enemy Crabs?!? Really?!?

Google it. Or type it into scribblenauts. I don't care.

FLIP OVER... THIS CRAB. AND ATTACK ITS WEAKPOINT. FOR MASSIVE DAMAGE.
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PostSubject: Re: Elysia Risna   Thu Jul 29, 2010 2:04 am

I see... And am concerned...
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PostSubject: Re: Elysia Risna   Sun Aug 01, 2010 1:38 pm

Hm... Well, what about if I phrased it more weaknessy?

"Phazon enhancement has made her flesh too hot to to put anything more than cloth on for proper thermostasis, and therefore in not often able to wear sufficient armor."

... or something?
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