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PostSubject: Re: Talon Aran (Retired)   Talon Aran (Retired) - Page 2 Icon_minitimeSat Jun 23, 2012 9:42 am

I edited it a little, adding the PED to the powersuit(Why I didn't think of that before, I don't know, considering how Phazon-based he is.) and his other pistol he recently started using.
Also, would I be allowed to make it another transforming blade? I didn't do this initially because it seemed overpowered, but I thought about it and now I want to do it.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Aran (Retired)   Talon Aran (Retired) - Page 2 Icon_minitimeSat Jun 23, 2012 9:11 pm

Sure, go ahead and add another one and I'll update it.

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Done.

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Updated.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Aran (Retired)   Talon Aran (Retired) - Page 2 Icon_minitimeWed Jun 27, 2012 11:54 pm

Added upgrades from the recent RP as post-fusion upgrades.

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updated

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Aran (Retired)   Talon Aran (Retired) - Page 2 Icon_minitimeTue May 21, 2013 9:10 am

I'm thinking of revising a part of his backstory to explain just why his body bonded with Phazon so easily, with inspiration from the "conduits" from inFamous. Namely that he was born with a gene that made him able to get abilities from Phazon without harmful effects.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Aran (Retired)   Talon Aran (Retired) - Page 2 Icon_minitimeFri Aug 30, 2013 2:06 am

Edited a simple thing, mainly just to show I'm still alive here. His knife's been changed from a generic combat knife to a Karambit
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Aran (Retired)   Talon Aran (Retired) - Page 2 Icon_minitimeWed Mar 19, 2014 1:29 pm

Updated the Powersuit image with a much better one
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Updated. Trying to check in as much as possible.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Aran (Retired)   Talon Aran (Retired) - Page 2 Icon_minitimeSat May 10, 2014 3:40 am

Thinking of switching out Talon's weapons. Possibly switching the beam blades out for a high frequency sword(Whether transforming from the guns or just a separate weapon) powered by his Phazon.


Also making a bunch of edits including giving him a Zero Suit equivalent, and taking out a bunch of dumb stuff that didn't work/I never really used like the syringes.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Aran (Retired)   Talon Aran (Retired) - Page 2 Icon_minitimeSat May 10, 2014 8:02 am

Just post when it's done.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Aran (Retired)   Talon Aran (Retired) - Page 2 Icon_minitimeSat May 10, 2014 9:13 am

Instead of outright removing the beam sword, I'll nerf it a bit. And remove the "lightsaber like" description, so really it's more of an emergency weapon/quick melee attack. I'm still adding the HF Blade because I feel he'd use that more.
Done editing for now.
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Updated.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Aran (Retired)   Talon Aran (Retired) - Page 2 Icon_minitimeSat Aug 02, 2014 11:16 am

I decided after some thought to remove his telekinesis ability, replacing it with a modified grapple beam. I figure I don't have him use it enough anyway, so I figured I'd give him something I consider cooler(inspired by the Leash from Bulletstorm). Now his abilities are mostly physical except for the telepathy.
Also removed his redundant energy blast power.

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Updated again.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Aran (Retired)   Talon Aran (Retired) - Page 2 Icon_minitimeSun Dec 21, 2014 3:42 pm

Thinking of adding the short range teleportation device he got from that really old RP that unfortunately was never finished, but I'm not sure if that would be balanced or not. Thoughts?

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what RP was it?

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Aran (Retired)   Talon Aran (Retired) - Page 2 Icon_minitimeMon Dec 22, 2014 6:02 am

Was thinking of either making it a teleporting device...Or a device that speeds him up to a point where it looks like he's teleporting, but I gotta think of a drawback because that sounds really overpowered.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Aran (Retired)   Talon Aran (Retired) - Page 2 Icon_minitimeTue Dec 23, 2014 4:45 pm

Crazyzealot wrote:
Was thinking of either making it a teleporting device...Or a device that speeds him up to a point where it looks like he's teleporting, but I gotta think of a drawback because that sounds really overpowered.

Make it work only over short distances and give it a cool down. Suddenly you have what is pretty much a 'Blink' ability rather then something like a teleport.
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PostSubject: Re: Talon Aran (Retired)   Talon Aran (Retired) - Page 2 Icon_minitimeTue Dec 23, 2014 7:46 pm

Added it to the profile. Is a 1 minute cooldown enough?

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Aran (Retired)   Talon Aran (Retired) - Page 2 Icon_minitimeSat Dec 27, 2014 2:56 am

Added a frigate to his ships in the profile. I figured it was kinda silly that he was a rather high ranking Space Pirate but didn't have command of his own SP Frigate.
And figured I'd add an assault rifle considering he's wielding a rifle in the picture.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Aran (Retired)   Talon Aran (Retired) - Page 2 Icon_minitimeSat Dec 27, 2014 3:27 pm

Crazyzealot wrote:
Added it to the profile. Is a 1 minute cooldown enough?
12 seconds would be enough. About the same as a blink dagger.

The additions of weapons and ships are fine as well.
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When I was writing it down I forgot how long a minute would actually be for a cooldown. 12 seconds sounds about right, thanks.

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