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PostSubject: Re: Talon Aran (Retired)   Tue Jan 27, 2015 2:54 am

Updated, adding his ship from the legacy era. I wanted to add on because of technological advancements, but I really don't know if I went a bit too overboard with it. Is it too overpowered for a capital ship?

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Aran (Retired)   Tue Jan 27, 2015 1:21 pm

I don't think so.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Aran (Retired)   Tue Feb 10, 2015 12:02 pm

Updated with more Legacy information. And a battle theme, because why not.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Aran (Retired)   Tue Feb 17, 2015 6:55 am

Updated with Talon's new fighter in the Legacy universe, Killer Queen.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Aran (Retired)   Tue Feb 24, 2015 9:41 am

Minor updates and such.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Aran (Retired)   Wed Feb 25, 2015 1:29 am

Updated with Killer Queen's appearance.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Aran (Retired)   Tue Mar 24, 2015 6:45 pm

And updated with some relatively minor details, but still an update.
Man I just reread the first replies and realized how much I cut down from him, but I prefer him this way. I sorta lost interest in the energy blasts(especially when he uses guns that do the same thing) and telekinesis(Leash beam is cooler).

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Aran (Retired)   Tue Mar 31, 2015 6:23 am

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xVjOK2KCwqg
This song just seems like it would be so right for him to have about him at some time for some reason. mainly for his ship pretty much obviously.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Aran (Retired)   Tue Mar 31, 2015 6:32 am

It's actually named after Yoshikage Kira's Stand from JoJos Bizarre Adventure Part 4 too, but I kinda named it after both.(I just had Jojo in mind when I named it)
I could see Talon naming his ship after a Queen song.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Aran (Retired)   Tue Mar 31, 2015 6:34 am

Oh, I didn't mean anything like that. I just saw the song on YouTube while watching a lyric video for "Don't stop me now", and it struck me as funny since they had the same name, and then I listened to it, and it seemed like it would fit the ship. that's why I mentioned it.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Aran (Retired)   Fri Apr 03, 2015 10:17 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Aran (Retired)   Sat May 02, 2015 12:38 am

Changed his legacy suit design, I like this one better.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Aran (Retired)   Sun Jan 03, 2016 9:48 pm

Added details about his death to the character history, will play it out or write a story for it later.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Aran (Retired)   Mon Jan 04, 2016 4:01 am

that is sad (boohoo/tear sad, not pathetic sad), but I can see so many ways that could play out f***ing awesome.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Aran (Retired)   Wed Jan 06, 2016 12:23 am

I was thinking he would go with that type of death simply because Phazon corruption was starting to overtake him(something I was forgetting to address in the first Legacy RP) and he wanted to go out with a big explosion rather than become the next Dark Samus.
Though I could see him being the type of guy to hide that kind of thing rather than tell anybody. I might play it up a bit more when I play him in RPs that happen in the time shortly before the legacy period.
Also realized I forgot to add the part describing his Legacy appearance. Updated again.

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Aran (Retired)   Wed Jan 13, 2016 11:27 am

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PostSubject: Re: Talon Aran (Retired)   Fri Sep 22, 2017 5:37 pm

Just wanted to make it perfectly clear that I'm never bringing this character back and I honestly regret making a "long lost brother of Samus raised by space pirates" character. It feels like it sends a bad image on what kind of roleplayer I am that I ever even had this happen.
If it were my choice he'd be retconned out of existence.

I don't mean any offense to people who like the character(or even people who approved him) I just can't stand playing him and want that to be clear to newcomers that this is a totally retired character.

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