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PostSubject: Garrett (no sir name identified)    Garrett (no sir name identified)  Icon_minitimeSat Dec 11, 2010 8:56 am

Player ID:motro

Character name:Garrett

Race:human (besides his ocular enhancement)

Age:24 (at time of pic)

Gender:male

Height:5" 10'

Weight:143

Appearance: Garrett (no sir name identified)  Garret11

Known Languages:english, and space pirate (both fluently)

Organization:360th rebelion (i have permision from toasty)

Alignment:Neutral

Personality:sarcastic, witty

Strengths:stealth, hand-to-hand combat

Weaknesses:long range combat

Likes/Dislikes: money/pain

Equipment:pair of small vibration knifes, smoke grenades, invisibility matrix (prevents unfired and x-ray beams as well as visible light to bend around my suit... only works when i move very slowly and curl myself into a ball) and a contractable arm lazer (very weak but can retract into a arm band ((its the one in the picture)))

Character History:lived in the slums of earth for most of his life untill he became fed up with it. he started stealing to survive. unfortunatly it couldnt pay the billls as well as he wanted and so he turned to bounty hunting. as a bounty hunter he could use his skills of stealth and dextarity that had come with thiefing to kill prime pirate targets. he did this until he met jill, she pitched an ideal that he agreed with. he decided to join the rebelion and he fought in a major battle that ended project "estare"


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PostSubject: Re: Garrett (no sir name identified)    Garrett (no sir name identified)  Icon_minitimeSat Dec 11, 2010 2:15 pm

if he's mostly human, what's he doing with the pirates?

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PostSubject: Re: Garrett (no sir name identified)    Garrett (no sir name identified)  Icon_minitimeSat Dec 11, 2010 2:16 pm

RildokxNanoFate wrote:
if he's mostly human, what's he doing with the pirates?

weren't there at least some pirate?

He never played 1 metroid game mind you, he joined because hes a friend from school.
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PostSubject: Re: Garrett (no sir name identified)    Garrett (no sir name identified)  Icon_minitimeSat Dec 11, 2010 2:27 pm

I'm not saying there aren't human pirates in the Metroid universe, I'm just saying the Space Pirates are their own race of pirates. So maybe he was just a human pirate from a random group of pirates?

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PostSubject: Re: Garrett (no sir name identified)    Garrett (no sir name identified)  Icon_minitimeSat Dec 11, 2010 2:34 pm

RildokxNanoFate wrote:
I'm not saying there aren't human pirates in the Metroid universe, I'm just saying the Space Pirates are their own race of pirates. So maybe he was just a human pirate from a random group of pirates?

I'm guessing.
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PostSubject: Re: Garrett (no sir name identified)    Garrett (no sir name identified)  Icon_minitimeSun Dec 12, 2010 1:58 am

Is that what you meant by it motro?

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PostSubject: Re: Garrett (no sir name identified)    Garrett (no sir name identified)  Icon_minitimeSun Dec 12, 2010 6:59 am

pretty much i was actually thinking of changing his race but i figure that wouldn't help out with his blending in with both federation and pirate groups
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PostSubject: Re: Garrett (no sir name identified)    Garrett (no sir name identified)  Icon_minitimeSun Dec 12, 2010 9:26 am

There's very few races that would be able to do such a thing, and I'm not sure which ones if any. Any suggestions Toasty?

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PostSubject: Re: Garrett (no sir name identified)    Garrett (no sir name identified)  Icon_minitimeMon Dec 13, 2010 2:41 am

Nope.
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PostSubject: Re: Garrett (no sir name identified)    Garrett (no sir name identified)  Icon_minitimeMon Dec 13, 2010 4:25 am

couldn't i just stick with human? or do they stick out that badly in a group of pirates?
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PostSubject: Re: Garrett (no sir name identified)    Garrett (no sir name identified)  Icon_minitimeMon Dec 13, 2010 1:59 pm

In a group of space pirates, kinda yeah.

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PostSubject: Re: Garrett (no sir name identified)    Garrett (no sir name identified)  Icon_minitimeMon Dec 13, 2010 9:13 pm

I understood that the space pirates where mainly made up of alien races, but I thought they still let humans join the ranks.
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PostSubject: Re: Garrett (no sir name identified)    Garrett (no sir name identified)  Icon_minitimeMon Dec 13, 2010 11:24 pm

i dont know then... i'd have to change my whole backstory if he cant fit in with the pirates and the fedaration.
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PostSubject: Re: Garrett (no sir name identified)    Garrett (no sir name identified)  Icon_minitimeMon Dec 13, 2010 11:41 pm

I'm sure the federation lets all races join there ranks, just be an alien.
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PostSubject: Re: Garrett (no sir name identified)    Garrett (no sir name identified)  Icon_minitimeMon Dec 13, 2010 11:44 pm

you know what, better yet give me a chance to redo the character he may turn out better.
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PostSubject: Re: Garrett (no sir name identified)    Garrett (no sir name identified)  Icon_minitimeTue Dec 14, 2010 4:49 am

Chance given.

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PostSubject: Re: Garrett (no sir name identified)    Garrett (no sir name identified)  Icon_minitimeTue Dec 14, 2010 11:50 am

updated and i was right i think he came out better
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PostSubject: Re: Garrett (no sir name identified)    Garrett (no sir name identified)  Icon_minitimeTue Dec 14, 2010 11:54 am

If you where Smart, Athletic, and Healthy, then why couldn't you get a job?
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PostSubject: Re: Garrett (no sir name identified)    Garrett (no sir name identified)  Icon_minitimeTue Dec 14, 2010 12:00 pm

because its not him... a 9 to 5 job just inst the kind of thing he could enjoy
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PostSubject: Re: Garrett (no sir name identified)    Garrett (no sir name identified)  Icon_minitimeTue Dec 14, 2010 12:47 pm

Y'know, I can't see a character like this fitting in the Metroid universe... he seems more or less like a regular human. Also, geez, this is the tiniest thing I've seen. Maybe you should put more detail in the character and explain how he would fit into the Metroid universe...? I know for a fact that more detail that actually explains the character = more of a chance of it being approved. Perhaps you should just work on his character in general instead of submitting half-completed characters.
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PostSubject: Re: Garrett (no sir name identified)    Garrett (no sir name identified)  Icon_minitimeTue Dec 14, 2010 12:52 pm

Hes new to RP in general, let him be all like that if he wants, he will lern.
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PostSubject: Re: Garrett (no sir name identified)    Garrett (no sir name identified)  Icon_minitimeTue Dec 14, 2010 12:54 pm

He won't learn if no one will point out his mistakes AND show him EXACTLY how to fix them, Toasty. You have to lead a new roleplayer carefully, or he/she will start making overpowered characters that no one likes.
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PostSubject: Re: Garrett (no sir name identified)    Garrett (no sir name identified)  Icon_minitimeTue Dec 14, 2010 1:27 pm

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How would this character be used?

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PostSubject: Re: Garrett (no sir name identified)    Garrett (no sir name identified)  Icon_minitimeTue Dec 14, 2010 1:30 pm

RildokxNanoFate wrote:
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.......................... :(confused):
How would this character be used?

The only thing I could see this character be used for is... maybe Assassin's Creed or something like that. Or maybe an original character meant for a different universe.

Otherwise, I can't ever see this character being in Metroid.
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PostSubject: Re: Garrett (no sir name identified)    Garrett (no sir name identified)  Icon_minitimeTue Dec 14, 2010 11:48 pm

kay sry ill take my bsession out and replace it with a character thats a bit more.... genaric
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