family reunion

"will she hury up its been 13 years i cant wait to much longer."

(how that for a start)

(OOC: That's not much of a start... It's only a person, who we don't know ATM, saying one sentence. You didn't describe any part of what the area is like, not that you really have to, and you didn't say anything about what happening.)

(( OOC:

Question.



I can understand you'r new to role play but let me at least give me give you some pointers. In forum role play you have to write stuff (Blasphemy, I know right?) and not just write like 1 line and expect me to be able to write a good role play based on that.

Here is an example of how long a regular post should be

______________________________________________________________________

Enter Jill Valentine
______________________________________________________________________

Another day passed by. Being a bounty hunter was free-lance work, witch is nice to say, but all it really means is that when theres no work, theres no money, and when theres no money, theres no food. I was sitting on my bead flipping through the chances of a TV when I got a message on my terminal sitting across the room. I sprang from my bed and ran over to the computer. It was a message from the federation. I was surprised to get the message. There ha-dent been a job open for awhile. I opened that message and read over it.

"My god..."

The first thing that surprised me was that the message was sent only to me. It wasn't a normal bulletin message that the federation normally sent out, No, The federation sent a message Directly to me. but that wasn't the strangest part, no, The message was asking that I help them trace down a rouge soldier, and get him alive, that had been on the lamb for a long time, But that wasn't the strangest part at all, no, The strangest part of it all was that the solider I was spouse to hunt down was named Adrian Shepard. The name was very familiar to me. It was the name of the man who helped me get adjusted to life in this time. He adopted me when I was unfrozen. He was on a mission to help guard a science team that had found an old mining site on the wastelands of earth where they had found an old town. The problem was that there was a pirate invasion just before this happened and there where still some pockets of pirates hiding out on the planet, it just so happened that there was a pirate camp in the old mines. He had told me that the pirates found me and where planing on selling me as a slave, and that if they where to come any later and I would have been gone. He was also the one who thought me to defend myself.

This came as a huge shock to me because I though he was dead. He had left the house one day saying he would be back and that he was just going to go on a mission. I waited days on end waiting for him to come back before I had a friend of his from the federation come through the door. He had told me that Adrian had died on a mission and that unless I could pay the bill's and make my own up keep that I he would adopt I was 16 and still a minor at the time. I found a way to make ends meet for 2 years before becoming a bounty hunter. The man had offered me to join the federation. I would have been able to go in as a higher rank them most people because of my previous training with Adrian. that man also offered me a spot on an elite team. I declined that mans offers. His name was Samuel Redford. He was good friends with me and Adrian. They would often go on the same missions together, Thought they where in different units all together, Sam was a higher rank then Adrian and would be giving him orders. Adrian was the closest thing I had to family in this fucked up world, and now he was gone. I felt dead on the inside for a long time. I eventually got over it but there was always that bit of me that was numb. When I went on missions helping with other people problems It helped the pain, it helped me forget about my own problems... So did killing people... The thrill of battle, the sheer adrenalin rush. It was enough to keep me distracted for a long time.

But the fact that I got a message from the federation telling me he was alive, and asking me to find him. It made me question so many things. I had to see Adrian one more time. I ran out of my front door and jumped into my ship, setting cores for the only place he would hide. I didn't have to go very far. He was on earth.

I had made it to the location to see that I had landed back at the old mining camp where he had rescued me. Memories of the event rushed through my mind. I had phased out and had gone into a flash back...))

(OOC: Now that's more of a good introduction. Of course you don't have to be that descriptive, but be somewhere between what you do now to what she just put.)

(ok lets try this agen)

Log entry 1

"13 years ago ridley atacked this place and still i am alone and waiting for her my older sister samus aran.siting on the dystoied remains of the house where we lived will she show up will even rember me at all this i am not sure becaouse of what the x did to me.but i dont care as long as my siser comes here i will be happy..."

(and so it begins)

"Man where is 313 said she would be here 2 hours ago maan she's late"

(so how is it now and i used 313 because i cant rember any other arorua uints)

______________________________________________________________________

Enter Samus Aran

Present Day

Earth Colony K-2L
______________________________________________________________________

I landed my ship on the broken remains of where I use to live before Ridley had came and destroyed it. I got out of the ship not wearing my power armor and took a steep on the land. Flash backs from my past rushed into my mind. I wasn't sure why I came back here in the first place. I stood there just traumatized by the memories that came to me. A soft wind blew by and I already wanted to leave.

(OOC:Can I join this RP?)

((OOC: Ask Sora))

"so you finaly came samus aran"

(sora steps out )

Talon landed his fighter in the outskirts of the ruins, wondering why he was going here. He got out of it, walking toward the remains. Why does this place feel so familiar? he wondered. He noticed Samus and, staying out of her sight, slowly started to take out his pistol to aim at her head. No, she's too far away. She could probably activate her powersuit or something if I miss, and I'm not even close to being armed well enough to win a fight with her, he thought and reholstered his weapon, walking closer to them.

______________________________________________________________________

Enter Samus Aran

Present Day
______________________________________________________________________

I turned around quick as lighting with a gun up and pointed at the voice. I could see the robot come out from the darkness. I took a step back with my gun still pointed at the robot.

"How the... But you'r..."

I took a long hard long at the mirror image of myself. It was like a Time Paradox had happened or something. I gave the robot a dead stare and said,

"Give me one good reason not to kill you now."

"because we need to talk"

(sora removes his suit)

That's a...guy? Talon thought. Who is he? He got closer, hiding behind some debris as he listened to them.

((OOC: Can SA-X even take its suit off. Its a robot.))

(it sora aran samus's brother there is a reason i called it family reuoin)

((OOC: Samus Had A Brother?!





How the hell dose that work?! ))

(have you even read my charter regstration post i has all the info on him )

(OOC: My character is also Samus's brother...though he doesn't know. I wonder if there will be another brother. Named John Aran. "John Aran who was Samus Aran's brother was one day AN OFFICE typing on a computer...")

((OOC: What where samuses parents not content with having one child so then had 12 all of the same age? and the rest are boys?))

(whatever can we get back to the rp now )

______________________________________________________________________

Enter Samus Aran

Present Day
______________________________________________________________________

I looked at the man for a long time. He was younger than me. I thought I knew who he was but It couldn't have been.

"Who the hell are you?"

I kept my gun pointed at him. I just couldn't tell what was so familiar about him.

"hey dont shot 313 said you would come and man was he right the names sora, sora aran

(puts his hand out to shake samus's)

She has a brother?, Talon thought then started looking around the area, wondering why it seemed so familiar to him.

______________________________________________________________________

Enter Samus Aran

Present Day
______________________________________________________________________

I looked at the man as he put his hand out to me.

"I don't have any family..."

I looked at him and wanted to know why he was here. He wasn't reconcilable in any way but something about him seamed so familiar.

"My family died here, along time ago."

Talon tried to get closer, hiding in cover behind a low wall. He started to have flash backs, memories that made no sense to him. What the hell?, he thought. After the flash backs stopped, he looked around the corner, watching them.