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PostSubject: Pajak   Mon Apr 22, 2013 2:32 am

Player ID: GreenArmy
Character name: Pajak
Race: Pseudo-Arachnid
Age: Optimally developed
Gender: Male Personality
Height: 6 feet 4 inches (can rear on hind legs and extend to twelve feet)
Weight: 400 lbs
Appearance: Red carapace and spider like appearance. Four large black eyes positioned in the center of the face. Eight long legs and two "arms". His carapace is armored and can resit most beam and light ballistic weapons.
Known Languages: Arachnid and English/common language
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Personality: Pajak has bery little understanding of emotions other than rage, fear, or joy. He can be very single minded and has the tendency to be very aggressive. This has put him at odds with others.
Strengths: Powerful long to medium range shooter, can see perfectly fine in darkened areas, does not loose sense of direction in caves or deep underground tunnels.
Weaknesses: Not too good at hand to hand combat, is highly susceptible to radiation and heavy ballistic explosives.
Likes: Caves, deserts Dislikes: Radiation, any species that is more aggressive than he is.
Equipment: None
Character History: Pajak is an Arachnid Warrior who was bred for the purpose of traveling galactic space to study specifically the mysterious element Phazon. Pajak for the most part spends his time exploring areas that might otherwise be of little to know interest to other beings. His complex breeding process sets him apart from other members of his species so that he may more easily communicate with other beings. Despite his enhanced intelligence, Pajak has a hard time understanding emotional ambitions of other beings. He is not so much as callous as he is confused in these areas. Almost none of his past exploits have amounted to anything substantial. However his is very ambitious to continue his unending quest for knowledge. Pajak is borderline obsessed with finding Phazon since due to the destruction of it's source at the hands of the Bounty Hunter Samus Aran it is assumed that it no longer exists. Due to this he harbors resentment towards the Galactic Federation and distrusts their operatives. Pajak still continues his search for any remnant of Phazon in the galaxy, even going as far as trying to gain access to Federation Laboratories and records to see if they are hiding it, none of these attempts have amounted to much success and he is not proud of his failure. If there is any Phazon left, he will find it.


Other: In desperate situations he can dig tunnels and trenches to avoid enemies. In a meditated state he can communicate telepathically with other beings, but this is extremely difficult. 


Weapons: Plasma Based Beam Rifle, capable of rapid fire and precision shots.
Weapon Abilities: Infinite ammunition but can overheat or break if used incorrectly.
Ship: Arachnid Exploration Vessel. Armed with Heavy Beam weaponry.
Registered to the name of: Pajak
Aesthetic: http://i80.servimg.com/u/f80/18/28/57/82/arachn10.jpg


Last edited by GreenArmy on Sat Jun 22, 2013 2:09 pm; edited 3 times in total (Reason for editing : Continuity Check)
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PostSubject: Re: Pajak   Mon Apr 22, 2013 8:51 am

...Yeah, I'm sorry, cause I like the concept myself, but I don't think Rildok will approve. Crossovers just don't happen here, but there is another site where you could put him for sure if you wanted. It's another run by this site's admin, it's called total fantasy roleplaying, you can get to it by the affiliates links. not saying it won't get approved for sure, I'm just saying from a personal experience, I don't think it will. if you want, I'll explain sometime.

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PostSubject: Re: Pajak   Mon Apr 22, 2013 11:28 am

To be fair the whole roleplay idea is about FanFiction, so I think he has every right to incorporate 'Arachnid' stuff into his character. Again, It's all about admin's choice.
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PostSubject: Re: Pajak   Mon Apr 22, 2013 11:46 am

I tried to have just a small thing from another series that existed outside the metroid universe for my very first character (who never got approved by the way, too many problems with 'im), and had to remove it because it wasn't metroid, and was another series. I don't think a character like this would be approved.

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PostSubject: Re: Pajak   Tue Apr 23, 2013 9:19 am

I fully understand if it isn't approved but would mind if I leave it up here until I know for sure?
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PostSubject: Re: Pajak   Tue Apr 23, 2013 10:52 am

GreenArmy wrote:
I fully understand if it isn't approved but would mind if I leave it up here until I know for sure?

Didn't quite understand what you meant, we all make grammatical mistakes. If this answers your question:
Keep it there. We're not the Moderators or Administrators. Wait for Rildok to approve or disapprove.
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PostSubject: Re: Pajak   Tue Apr 23, 2013 10:59 am

Sorry yes that is what I meant. I should have put a comma and then a "would you mind if I keep it up"
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PostSubject: Re: Pajak   Sat Apr 27, 2013 6:30 am

Yeah... I'm sorry but I'm not too sure about this character. One of the things is that you say he is susceptible to ballistic explosives, but the carapace is resistant against ballistic weaponry. And the whole arachnid thing too...

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PostSubject: Re: Pajak   Sat Apr 27, 2013 11:10 pm

Yes there are actually a few flaws in the character design I didn't fix them unless I knew for sure that the whole concept was accepted or not.
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PostSubject: Re: Pajak   Sun Apr 28, 2013 1:45 am

Would you be more inclined to accept him if I corrected those continuity errors?
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PostSubject: Re: Pajak   Fri May 10, 2013 11:01 pm

It would depend on what those would be, but go ahead and I'll look it over.

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PostSubject: Re: Pajak   Mon May 13, 2013 2:41 pm

I hope your offer still stands I know I was registered on the other site but I didn't see that you had responded yet.
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