Espera Nota, Hero of The War

My main issue is that you really need to separate the paragraphs somewhat more. The wall of text is rather hard to read.

That was just my writing style for characters back then. In fact, I only changed because Toasty wouldn't approve a character if it was organized to her standards (instead of going by the internal facts of the character, such as power held. I got a ridiculously overpowered character through that. Check out Lost (Legacy Era) if you want to see what I mean (Bob Batshit and ...wraith something or something wraith present the other portions of her ridiculousness with character approvals.)

wow. changes. lots of changes. and yet, nothing actually changed. how dull.

So uh...I kinda just realized that this fucker is basically not-quite-as-evil Dr. Eggman. Literally earlier today. And yes, I did return just to say this.